tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4633733525260132802.post1335038582966595436..comments2010-02-10T18:38:49.073+00:00Comments on Page Write: Appreciate This - an exerptJxhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04707848654261387582noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4633733525260132802.post-7103214950789974842009-11-24T23:39:43.748+00:002009-11-24T23:39:43.748+00:00Thank you both, I'm currently trying to decide...Thank you both, I'm currently trying to decide where I should submit this story once it is finished.<br /><br />The neutral territory was supposed to refer to the fact they are meeting up in a car park rather than at either of their homes or favourite places, but if that isn't coming across I'll have a rethink!Jxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04707848654261387582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4633733525260132802.post-8740511241853949582009-11-24T23:24:57.764+00:002009-11-24T23:24:57.764+00:00I'm also intrigued.
Since you invite editoria...I'm also intrigued.<br /><br />Since you invite editorial comments, I'll add one thought - the idea that his car constitutes 'neutral' territory is strange to me. It either implies <i>something</i> (tbd) about their relationship, else it's simply misplaced. Apologies that I can't be more precise!Rachel Cotterillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08969719330048416996noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4633733525260132802.post-10634386326544424852009-11-13T18:55:20.390+00:002009-11-13T18:55:20.390+00:00I want to know more;}.
GinaI want to know more;}.<br />GinaG.~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17630804996307279182noreply@blogger.com